Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Entwined - Poetry Contest

Once  two hearts entwined into one
Body and soul drunken embrace fusion
Sunshine and starry skies we couldn't ignore
On wings we use to soar
Fly forever and never fly away
Love I thought would always stay

A desire to rekindle the drop of love left
Dry the river of tears I have shed
Under my skin sweet whisper
Yearns, but also forages anger

Though reclusive, in my solitude
Escape is an illusion to elude       
Quivering rumbles feelings of disquietude
Our soul’s no longer entwined, but brewed
This journey has ended, it’s time to say goodbye

2/9/2016

Poetry Contest: Entwined 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Beautiful Scars February 23, 2016 at 11:56 AM Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 11:44 AM Eve, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

James Inman February 23, 2016 at 9:44 AM Sad but relevant write, Eve. It's more the norm than everlasting love. Eve Roper February 23, 2016 at 11:16 AM Thank you! Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry February 23, 2016 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on your win! I agree, sad and beautiful. Well written. Eve Roper February 23, 2016 at 11:17 AM Thank you! Hugs Eve

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2016 at 12:42 AM sad and beautiful!..special congrats on your win, eve, and huggs Eve Roper February 23, 2016 at 11:17 AM Thank you!! Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 22, 2016 at 10:13 PM Congrats on great win with this superb verse Eve. Eve Roper February 23, 2016 at 11:18 AM Thank you!!! Hugs Eve

Dah Dahlusion February 21, 2016 at 11:12 AM Lovely! Bravo Poet! Eve Roper February 23, 2016 at 11:18 AM Thank you!! Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2016 at 3:57 PM another one that has sad overtones. VEry lovely write, Eve. Eve Roper February 9, 2016 at 4:02 PM Thank you, Andrea :) Hugs Eve

Nette Onclaud February 9, 2016 at 1:16 PM i didn't anticipate the twist in the end, eve.. a towering, beautiful write, sad yet well quilled!..huggs Eve Roper February 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM Thank you, Nette :) Hugs Eve

Bl Devnath February 9, 2016 at 12:36 PM Very sad poem filled with passion. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Eve Roper February 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM Thank you, BL Devnath, and for the best wishes :) Hugs Eve

Janice Canerdy February 9, 2016 at 9:28 AM A 7 for sure--this poem conveys the theme of how passion cools over time. Janice Eve Roper February 9, 2016 at 4:00 PM "Thank you, Janice, and for the 7! I guess that is why they call it the 7 year itch :) Hugs Eve"

Daniel Turner February 9, 2016 at 5:30 AM I really like your poem. I know how you feel, my spouse took off after 25 yrs of marriage, so I can relate. Eve Roper February 9, 2016 at 4:01 PM "Thank you, Daniel. Relationships can be hard sometimes Hugs Eve"