Notes About The Poem

Entwined Extremes

'Tween genius and insanity
    there may exist the faintest line.
Each one with other- may cross paths-
    their undercurrents, intertwine.
  
Reflect, what is insanity-
    but thinking on conflicting planes; 
perhaps a mind, set wild and free
    from gray conformity's dull pains.
  
A mind that’s opened far and wide 
    to see what some will never know;
emerged in pools of fantasies-
    to realms of genius, overflow.
  
And what's a genius- now reflect;
    a mind that walks an offbeat street,
creating feats of wonderment
    which customary minds can't meet.
  
And as it walks its lonely path,
    this open mind at times might brush,
its mirror-friend, insanity-
    into that outcast world, may rush.


February 10, 2016

~4th Place~
Contest: Black Sheep
Sponsor: Anthony Slausin
Judged: 07/20/2019

~3rd Place~
Contest: Entwined
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 02/22/2016

Urban Dictionary- Black Sheep:
"Someone who is treated differently than the rest- 
an outcast..."
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Mcgee Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Deep words well written. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:50 AM
So pleased to be reading this winning poem again, Sandra! Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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February 24, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Thanks
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February 23, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Love this Sandra. Well written and flows beautifully, nice rhyme as well.
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, James. Sandra
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win! Interesting and well written.
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:35 AM
special congrats on your win, sandra, and huggs
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, Nette. Hugs, sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo! Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 2:39 PM
I am touched by this write of yours, Sandra. I knew somebody who was very clever, with a bright future ahead of him, but mental problems halted him half way; life became a nightmare...sudden death saved him from further suffering. // paul
Haight Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Hi Paul, yes, this is a fine line. Many have walked it well and have become famous, others not so much. Thank you for your visit and comment. Sandr
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