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Entwined

Limbs of trees branching 

separate yet together

lives entwined by birth

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Written 2-13-2016
Entwined Contest by Broken Wings
Fifth Place

birthfamilysistertreeupliftinghaiku

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Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:44 AM

This is a very merited win, Susan....these three lines had 'winner' written over them when I read them a while back! Congratulations:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Sandra Haight

February 24, 2016 at 12:19 PM

Nice imagery in your few words, Susan. Nicely done! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry

February 25, 2016 at 11:16 PM

Thank you Sandra! Appreciate this. Hugs...

Beautiful Scars

February 23, 2016 at 11:59 AM

Susan, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 2:37 AM

Thank you luloo!! Appreciate your comment.

Poet Destroyer A

February 23, 2016 at 11:47 AM

Susan, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 2:36 AM

Thank you Linda! Very kind of you.

James Inman

February 23, 2016 at 11:10 AM

Very nice Susan, I have 5 siblings. Sometimes I love them, sometimes not so much but they are always there.

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 2:36 AM

You are very fortunate for they are. Thank you!

Nette Onclaud

February 23, 2016 at 12:51 AM

well done, susan.. super congrats!.. huggs

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 2:35 AM

Thank you nette! Hugs...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 22, 2016 at 10:24 PM

Congrats on great win with this superb verse Susan.

Susan Gentry

February 24, 2016 at 2:34 AM

Thank you Dr.! Appreciate your comment.

Ingrid Showalter Swift

February 16, 2016 at 9:45 AM

Love it!

Susan Gentry

February 16, 2016 at 8:45 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2016 at 7:22 PM

wow, I love YOUR tree poem. We both took the same topic, a tree!!

Susan Gentry

February 16, 2016 at 12:24 AM

Thank you Andrea! I just went and read yours. Very good and your pic is perfect!

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 8:44 AM

A lovely take on this prompted theme, Susan; the final line is a winner in itself! gl in the contest. ~ Have a happy Valentine's Day:) ~~ paul

Susan Gentry

February 14, 2016 at 3:16 PM

Why thank you Paul! :) Happy Valentine's Day to you too.

Janice Canerdy

February 13, 2016 at 10:20 PM

good, very descriptive---Janice

Susan Gentry

February 14, 2016 at 2:47 AM

Thanks Janice!

Eric Boddie

February 13, 2016 at 2:49 PM

family, we have....to remind us Love is true....and forever lasts....susan my friend you must be the short poem queen....this is Beautifully inspiring....;)

Susan Gentry

February 14, 2016 at 2:46 AM

Thanks eric! You are sooo sweet! I'm glad you like this and I appreciate that you realize the importance of family... :) A queen might be a little too much... thanks for making me smile.

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