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Limbs of trees branching separate yet together lives entwined by birth ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written 2-13-2016 Entwined Contest by Broken Wings Fifth Place

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Date: 2/28/2016 4:44:00 AM
This is a very merited win, Susan....these three lines had 'winner' written over them when I read them a while back! Congratulations:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win! :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/25/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Chantelle!
Date: 2/24/2016 12:19:00 PM
Nice imagery in your few words, Susan. Nicely done! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/25/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! Appreciate this. Hugs...
Date: 2/23/2016 11:59:00 AM
Susan, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:37:00 AM
Thank you luloo!! Appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:47:00 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Linda! Very kind of you.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:10:00 AM
Very nice Susan, I have 5 siblings. Sometimes I love them, sometimes not so much but they are always there.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:36:00 AM
You are very fortunate for they are. Thank you!
Date: 2/23/2016 12:51:00 AM
well done, susan.. super congrats!.. huggs
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:35:00 AM
Thank you nette! Hugs...
Date: 2/22/2016 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Dr.! Appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/16/2016 9:45:00 AM
Love it!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/14/2016 9:17:00 PM
Ooo, I love it! Beautiful pen! :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 12:25:00 AM
Why thank you Chantelle! I so appreciate this. :)
Date: 2/14/2016 7:22:00 PM
wow, I love YOUR tree poem. We both took the same topic, a tree!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/16/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! I just went and read yours. Very good and your pic is perfect!
Date: 2/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
A lovely take on this prompted theme, Susan; the final line is a winner in itself! gl in the contest. ~ Have a happy Valentine's Day:) ~~ paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/14/2016 3:16:00 PM
Why thank you Paul! :) Happy Valentine's Day to you too.
Date: 2/13/2016 10:20:00 PM
good, very descriptive---Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/14/2016 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 2/13/2016 2:49:00 PM
family, we have....to remind us Love is true....and forever lasts....susan my friend you must be the short poem queen....this is Beautifully inspiring....;)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/14/2016 2:46:00 AM
Thanks eric! You are sooo sweet! I'm glad you like this and I appreciate that you realize the importance of family... :) A queen might be a little too much... thanks for making me smile.