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Entwined

Just now … crisscrossed sky lanterns fog the walls of a withering foliage, like hushed matte from dusk’s greenery Pouring balm on a requiem in need of shade, while in her veins drip… a constant gush as meshed twigs still interlace on leafy ribs Immersed in the ardor of their moments, one fragrant orchid and musky trunk…inseparable, bound together by affectionate, yet lost stars. With slight acceptance this rooted love will always meld despite tree of life faintly drooping; ...in clinched angle, she lays on his buried grass until dim twilight shuts off. For Broken Wing’s Entwined Contest 2/12/2016
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Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 4:37 AM
So pleased that this poem is a top winner, Nette, otherwise I might have completely missed it! You offer passionate and beautiful imagery in a style which is unmistakably yours:) Congratulations!! hugs // paul
Haight Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Lovely imagery of 'entwined,' Nette. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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February 23, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
Canerdy Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Nette, I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
Inman Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Passionate write with such imagery! Wonderful Nette.
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful well-written verse! Enjoyed reading this.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse dear nette..
Scars Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
Mohn Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:54 PM
dazzling in its descriptive wisps…truly beautiful Nette
Mara Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:37 AM
I like the sharp image this amazing poem creates. There is tenderness that flows beneath the surface of your deep expression!
Ongado Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Astoundingly moving and splendid poetry.It's hard to separate the twining of soul mates, much like the weave of life's tree!
Mara Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:37 AM
7 it is!
Canerdy Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Hauntingly beautiful, Nette! Janice
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Nette,you have painted such a beautiful picture, I love it. Good luck in the contest :)
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