Entwined

candy twist swan necks
sharing feelings silently
white graces caress




Feb 10th 2016
for contest 'entwined', sponsor Broken Wings
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Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Haiku! Excellent. A 7
Wigley Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Thanks Susan, glad you enjoyed it. Viv x
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Viv, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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February 23, 2016 at 11:46 AM
viv, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
Inman Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Great piece Viv.
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:46 AM
ohh, love your take on the theme, viv... my best congrats on your win!..huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb haiku Viv..
Murray Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Speechless.
Leiser Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:49 AM
This haiku with swan picture is so perfectly beautiful, Viv! Loved it :)
Inman Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Great write, Viv. (Viv's soft side, Awe.)
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February 10, 2016 at 3:30 AM
- Beautiful both in image and word, Viv - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise, I think everybody loves Swans. Viv x
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