Entropy

ENTROPHY Entropy says that matter can't last As energy holds it together. But as we go down, fighting the last I hope that just one little feather Sticks to the side of whatever's left over A bale of cotton, a field of clover. It's not that it matters it's me that it flatters So long as some semblance weathers.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/21/2024 5:03:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:47:00 PM

Richard, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Richard Jordan
Date: 2/9/2015 2:50:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the welcome. I can't believe how great everyone is and how encouraging this site is. I'd try your contest but it's romantic poetry, my weakest. My wife informs me I should "write what I know". So I've now switched to writing about frogs!

Skat A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:08:00 PM

RICHARD, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Richard Jordan
Date: 2/9/2015 2:58:00 PM

SKAT, thank you for the greeting. I can't believe anyone can write a villanelle! I tried yesterday and it was a mush. I'll keep following you and, hopefully, learning.