Entrapped In the Space Between the Nib and Quinine

trapped in the space on a  bard’s nib we slept,
Hibernated, slumbered and under the quinine stains we wept,
Yearned we did to spill ourselves on paper,
Bard he caged his thoughts and emotions for later.

Later, we heard them thoughts say as years went by,
Afraid we were for the burden on his heart was high,
Ever we knew that a lip curved in pain,
Can be kissed into a smile again.

Our neighbor, more sorrowing words, them lay folded,
Some on the table & most weeping in his heart, pounding his head all loaded.
A cry afar a sob we at times faintly hear,
A smile, an eruption we sense at times from his dear.

 A breeze is blowing nice and strong,
We hope to be on a page, to read  that all would throng.
The languid wings of air still carry the scent,
Of my sweetheart long after she went………………………
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:21 AM
Good one!
Prabhu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:37 AM
THANX
Roberts Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Well done Sashi ....Seren
Prabhu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:50 AM
THANK YOU
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Congrats on your win Sashi xx
Prabhu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:50 AM
thanx Mandy
A   Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Sashi, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD
A   Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:14 AM
your poem is excellent .... as always...pd
Prabhu Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:51 AM
thanx PD
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