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Entranced On An Island

When the quilt of stars spreads above our heads, And the crystals in my lover's eyes sparkle in the forest. Roaming hand in hand, not knowing what is before us. Smelling the fragrance of God's tall, verdant trees. Just you and I, my dearest... Humming a peaceful song for all of humanity. Let's cross this tiny stream with our beautiful feet, On smooth rocks, that are cold And yet softly sweet! And, trust that in eternal peace, We shall forever meet. 5/17/2019 9:45am PST

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/17/2019 8:08:00 PM

Your imagery is outstanding, my friend. Exquisitely done for sure! You keep out-doing yourself! Nice one.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/17/2019 10:19:00 PM

Still a beginner, Caren Thank you. Panagiota

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2019 3:38:00 PM

You keep upping the ante of romanticism, Panagiota. This is as refreshing as the water of the stream you will cross! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/17/2019 3:57:00 PM

Yes, I am. You noticed! Ha-ha! Maybe some don't like it. Well, the poem is not weeping over it. I got over comnents as a measure of a Poems strength. And will forever be commited to speaking my truth. Not here to get votes. Would fail in poetic politics' badly. Truth first,Popularity second, Panagiota