Entranced On An Island





When the quilt of stars spreads 
above our heads,
And the crystals in my lover's
eyes sparkle in the forest.
Roaming hand in hand, not
knowing what is before us.
Smelling the fragrance of God's
tall, verdant trees.
Just you and I, my dearest...
Humming a peaceful song for 
all of humanity.
Let's cross this tiny stream with
our beautiful feet,
On smooth rocks, that are cold
And yet softly sweet!
And, trust that in eternal peace,
We shall forever meet.


5/17/2019
9:45am PST
 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Your imagery is outstanding, my friend. Exquisitely done for sure! You keep out-doing yourself! Nice one.
Romios Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Still a beginner, Caren Thank you. Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 3:38 PM
You keep upping the ante of romanticism, Panagiota. This is as refreshing as the water of the stream you will cross! :) gw
Romios Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Yes, I am. You noticed! Ha-ha! Maybe some don't like it. Well, the poem is not weeping over it. I got over comnents as a measure of a Poems strength. And will forever be commited to speaking my truth. Not here to get votes. Would fail in poetic politics' badly. Truth first,Popularity second, Panagiota
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