Entranced and Enchanted

I never meant to fall in love with you but the first time we met I was entranced was it your yellow golden hair was it your blue eyes like a clear lake (in which I was drowning) perhaps it was your voice like a drifting melody but, I was enchanted and I loved you with all my heart oh, what a wild whirlwind romance and then you were asking me to marry you and I whispered yes into your ear . . . __________________________________ April 1, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Entranced and enchanted Copyright Protected, ID 20-1240-528-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to Strand Choice W Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention
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Inman Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Lovely.
La France Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:53 PM
James, thanks for the lovely, I am sort of sad this only got a HM, oh well, I suppose what we feel is good, another does not _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Such is falling in love! My husband’s eyes pulled me in...they still do!
La France Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting my poem, I never got tired of those eyes, sadly I visit him now at the cemetery, but he is always and forever in my heart _Constance
Horne Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 1:51 PM
beautiful romantic write, my friend. I hope you are both keeping well & safe xx
La France Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, we are both fine and hope you and Mom are also _Constance
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