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Entranced

I approached her slowly watching her eyes
We finally locked in trance
Zoning in our passion

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Brian's "Your Choice Once More" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Russell. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 1:27:00 AM

RUSSELL, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,..p.d.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/12/2011 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this deserving poem!---Lori

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2011 11:34:00 PM

Congratulations for your HM with this kimo, Russell. I well remember it!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 6:29:00 PM

Attraction !!! Poetic attraction...Now the question is....could u actually tell a woman u wrote this kimo about your first encounter? Wakka wakkka wakkka!!! fun stuff, Russell. Gwendolen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/11/2011 5:46:00 PM

cool and hauntingly exciting, Russell . Congrats to yo on your HM

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2011 9:46:00 AM

Congrats Russell on HM for these excellent lines of creativity luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 9:44:00 AM

mesmerizing lines ..that last line is wonderful.. zoning in our passion.. very well stated Russell ..good luck in the contest luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/10/2011 2:42:00 AM

POsitive Energy Works!. u feeling better? love is powerful

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 9:05:00 PM

You may worry but you still write some pretty fancy stuff. I love the zeroing in on the target Russ. P S Take one day at a time and do what you can. You can't ask more from yourself than that. Hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2011 12:37:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic piece, Russell

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/9/2011 8:50:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 11:39:00 PM

Sultry!