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Entranced

I approached her slowly watching her eyes
We finally locked in trance
Zoning in our passion

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Brian's "Your Choice Once More" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 16, 2011 at 12:41 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Russell. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2011 at 1:27 AM

RUSSELL, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,..p.d.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

November 12, 2011 at 7:11 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this deserving poem!---Lori

Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2011 at 11:34 PM

Congratulations for your HM with this kimo, Russell. I well remember it!

Gwendolen Song

November 11, 2011 at 6:29 PM

Attraction !!! Poetic attraction...Now the question is....could u actually tell a woman u wrote this kimo about your first encounter? Wakka wakkka wakkka!!! fun stuff, Russell. Gwendolen

Robert A. Dufresne

November 11, 2011 at 5:46 PM

cool and hauntingly exciting, Russell . Congrats to yo on your HM

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 11, 2011 at 9:46 AM

Congrats Russell on HM for these excellent lines of creativity luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2011 at 9:44 AM

mesmerizing lines ..that last line is wonderful.. zoning in our passion.. very well stated Russell ..good luck in the contest luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

November 10, 2011 at 2:42 AM

POsitive Energy Works!. u feeling better? love is powerful

Elizabeth Wesley

November 9, 2011 at 9:05 PM

You may worry but you still write some pretty fancy stuff. I love the zeroing in on the target Russ. P S Take one day at a time and do what you can. You can't ask more from yourself than that. Hugs