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ENTICING RED ROSE

white diamond dews soft petals dripping with sweat drifting to the earth enticing red rose nourishing beauty of dawn sun's aura smiles on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/6/2013 2:04:00 PM
This is a very sensual, if not lustful, read. Enticing...dripping...sweat...And that paired with the nature imagery is very interesting.
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:59:00 AM
Many thanks my friend for your visit to my page and for lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/22/2013 5:11:00 AM
BL superb haiku so enjoyed reading Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/22/2013 10:25:00 AM
Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for your beautiful comment, Loved always, bl
Date: 9/21/2013 9:18:00 PM
Very well executed haiku here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:46:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/20/2013 9:06:00 AM
This was damn beautiful. "White diamond dews"...absolutely!
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your visit and for very nice comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/20/2013 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful description, BL
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:34:00 AM
Thanks.......................,my friend. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/19/2013 12:52:00 PM
glwowing, glowing, bl... you have mastered this form with your ' aha' moments... enticing!..:) huggs and thanks for coming around!
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Date: 9/19/2013 1:23:00 PM
Multiple thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/19/2013 12:36:00 PM
Absolutely amazing! :) Great write...passionate and sweet!
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Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM
Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/19/2013 12:28:00 PM
- BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM
Thanks............., always loved, bl