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Enticing Red Rose

white diamond dews soft petals dripping with sweat drifting to the earth enticing red rose nourishing beauty of dawn sun's aura smiles on

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 10/6/2013 2:04:00 PM

This is a very sensual, if not lustful, read. Enticing...dripping...sweat...And that paired with the nature imagery is very interesting.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/7/2013 8:59:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your visit to my page and for lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/22/2013 5:11:00 AM

BL superb haiku so enjoyed reading Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/22/2013 10:25:00 AM

Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for your beautiful comment, Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/21/2013 9:18:00 PM

Very well executed haiku here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/21/2013 11:46:00 PM

Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

This was damn beautiful. "White diamond dews"...absolutely!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/20/2013 9:30:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your visit and for very nice comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2013 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful description, BL

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/20/2013 8:34:00 AM

Thanks.......................,my friend. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2013 12:52:00 PM

glwowing, glowing, bl... you have mastered this form with your ' aha' moments... enticing!..:) huggs and thanks for coming around!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2013 1:23:00 PM

Multiple thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/19/2013 12:36:00 PM

Absolutely amazing! :) Great write...passionate and sweet!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM

Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2013 12:28:00 PM

- BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM

Thanks............., always loved, bl