Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Enticing Red Rose

white diamond dews 
                                          soft petals dripping with sweat
                                                   drifting to the earth

                                                     enticing red rose
                                             nourishing beauty of dawn
                                                  sun's aura smiles on

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Jeremy Martin October 6, 2013 at 2:04 PM This is a very sensual, if not lustful, read. Enticing...dripping...sweat...And that paired with the nature imagery is very interesting. Bl Devnath October 7, 2013 at 8:59 AM Many thanks my friend for your visit to my page and for lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton September 22, 2013 at 5:11 AM BL superb haiku so enjoyed reading Shadow x smile Bl Devnath September 22, 2013 at 10:25 AM Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for your beautiful comment, Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish September 21, 2013 at 9:18 PM Very well executed haiku here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Bl Devnath September 21, 2013 at 11:46 PM Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Tacito September 20, 2013 at 9:06 AM This was damn beautiful. "White diamond dews"...absolutely! Bl Devnath September 20, 2013 at 9:30 AM Thanks a lot for your visit and for very nice comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2013 at 8:20 AM Beautiful description, BL Bl Devnath September 20, 2013 at 8:34 AM Thanks.......................,my friend. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud September 19, 2013 at 12:52 PM glwowing, glowing, bl... you have mastered this form with your ' aha' moments... enticing!..:) huggs and thanks for coming around! Bl Devnath September 19, 2013 at 1:23 PM Multiple thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian September 19, 2013 at 12:36 PM Absolutely amazing! :) Great write...passionate and sweet! Bl Devnath September 19, 2013 at 12:45 PM Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2013 at 12:28 PM - BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath September 19, 2013 at 12:45 PM Thanks............., always loved, bl