Enticing Icing and Pricing

Enticing Icing and Pricing

We were inspired by the great icing,
That had been attractive and enticing;
We wanted to buy;
Take home and try,
Until we saw what it cost and pricing.

Jim Horn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 3:45 AM
wonderfully crafted the limerick
Horn Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Rewrote it a little about gifts.
Devonshire Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Great metaphor, James! We were hoodwinked and now the stock market is crashing. Terrible economic news lately with GM plants closing too. Enjoy your holidays, Carolyn
Horn Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Check out it re-written a little and made oriented around Christmas gifts.
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