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Enticed, Go West, But East-Wood Be Best


“Enticed, go by West, but by East-wood be best”

The  GPS, a best, many confess,   
With sultry voices sounding like May West.
Gotta know limitations,
Use Atlas on vacations.
Do you feel lucky punk? Then GPS!

 In Honor of  Carolyn
And Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Techno-Limerick contest Moses. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/14/2011 10:59:00 AM

ha! very eastwood like ending! love it! congratulations on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:05:00 AM

JOHN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CAROLYN, TECHNO LIMERICK* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:07:00 PM

Good win, john! I really liked yours.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/10/2011 10:24:00 AM

John-absolutely love this one :) LOVE Mae West, too! Congrats. on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congrats Moses on a great win with this witty Limerick.. true true..luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2011 8:46:00 AM

My hubby has a GPS (it's me!)...he says I'm always telling him where to go! LOL! Just kidding of course, ...we don't have one, but many times we could use it, I think I would prefer Clint Eastwood, over May West, however!! Cute poem! Congratulations, John!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 8:30:00 AM

John, my GPS can take me to different cities quite well, but it often lands me at vacant lots when I use it to find local addresses. Guess I'm not a "lucky punk." Really enjoyed the humor in the poem and the double meaning in the title as well! The competition was stiff, so all who placed had to be in the top tier of both Alexa's and my rankings. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 8:30:00 AM

Ooops, Congratulations on your win!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2011 9:05:00 AM

Funny.....I just got a Gps and she tells me to go the wrong or long way alot. also if I don't go the way she says she gets quiet. one time she told us to make an illegal u-turn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2011 11:01:00 PM

Good one for GPS. I would not have a clue what to do with one!!