Enthusiasm

There was a boy named Maxim
Who went on a date with great enthusiasm
He took the girl to a museum
She asked him with sarcasm
Of his place of choice, with a spasm
He was amazed and could not fathom
This girl who just threw a tantrum
Who could not see with enthusiasm
What he got from a museum was sheer eyegasm.
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June 23, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Well, that sure is a cute surprise of a last line, Carol! Very good! Brings a chuckle to my heart. I think that 'eyegasm' rhymes with I-me-mygasm if I'm not mistaken. Thanks for the smiles, Gershon
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