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Enthusiasm

There was a boy named Maxim Who went on a date with great enthusiasm He took the girl to a museum She asked him with sarcasm Of his place of choice, with a spasm He was amazed and could not fathom This girl who just threw a tantrum Who could not see with enthusiasm What he got from a museum was sheer eyegasm.

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Date: 6/23/2020 8:37:00 PM
Well, that sure is a cute surprise of a last line, Carol! Very good! Brings a chuckle to my heart. I think that 'eyegasm' rhymes with I-me-mygasm if I'm not mistaken. Thanks for the smiles, Gershon
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