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Entertain Us They Do

Movies that we see 
Give us exciting highs 
Romance,horror,thrills 
Ma'tters not how good,bad be. 

Give us exciting highs 
Entertain us do 
Mat'ters not how good,bad be. 
Leaving thoughts awry. 

Entertain us do 
Yes this do all the time 
Leaving thoughts awry 
In varied ways and that's fine. 

Yes this do all the time 
Romance,horror,thrills 
In varied ways and that's fine 
Movies that we see. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2011


October, 14,2014

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Jack Ellison Date: 10/16/2014 5:50:00 PM Hello sweet friend! Must try one of these forms! Just dropping by to give you big hurrahs for a unique and entertaining write! As always... love from Jack XXXXX Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/16/2014 9:34:00 PM So nice of you to drop by my dear friend Jack! :) thank you for the big hurrahs and all. Much appreciated as always by me. love and hugs to you too! Take care! Brightest blessings! Xxxx D.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/16/2014 2:23:00 PM Now you made me want to go to the movies! Light & Love Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/16/2014 9:38:00 PM Thank you so much for stopping by Debbie, my dear friend! I appreciate it very much. Hugs! Love and Light! :) xxx D.

Bl Devnath Date: 10/16/2014 1:50:00 PM Yes, entertain us they do. Simple but beautiful. 7 I feel for you. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/16/2014 9:36:00 PM Thank you so much BL! You're such a nice friend.:) have a great day! Love and light! xxxxx D.

Jan Allison Date: 10/15/2014 7:07:00 PM I love the structure of the form with the repeated lines Dorian - you inspire me with your creativity:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/16/2014 9:24:00 PM Thank you Jan! Glad you liked the repeated lines. Lol. ... Love and light! Xxxx D.

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2014 3:32:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, entertainment is great from a very good movie..Thanks for the visits by my page..Sara Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 10/14/2014 2:20:00 PM D, A most interesting subject here on the modern movies and the entertainment industry today -- such as it is. A Great Write too, and I find the use of the "Pantoum" poetic style to be interesting. I've never tried that one yet, but it looks like the way you structured your subject and write melded well with the structure of the Pantoum-type verse. Looks like you're experimenting with different verse types as I am. Again, a most interesting approach my dear and a "7" too from me. Cheers, Gary Login to Reply