Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Pantoum

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Entertain Us They Do

Movies that we see 
Give us exciting highs 
Romance,horror,thrills 
Ma'tters not how good,bad be. 

Give us exciting highs 
Entertain us do 
Mat'ters not how good,bad be. 
Leaving thoughts awry. 

Entertain us do 
Yes this do all the time 
Leaving thoughts awry 
In varied ways and that's fine. 

Yes this do all the time 
Romance,horror,thrills 
In varied ways and that's fine 
Movies that we see. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2011


October, 14,2014

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Jack Ellison October 16, 2014 at 5:50 PM Hello sweet friend! Must try one of these forms! Just dropping by to give you big hurrahs for a unique and entertaining write! As always... love from Jack XXXXX Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 9:34 PM So nice of you to drop by my dear friend Jack! :) thank you for the big hurrahs and all. Much appreciated as always by me. love and hugs to you too! Take care! Brightest blessings! Xxxx D.

Debbie Guzzi October 16, 2014 at 2:23 PM Now you made me want to go to the movies! Light & Love Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 9:38 PM Thank you so much for stopping by Debbie, my dear friend! I appreciate it very much. Hugs! Love and Light! :) xxx D.

Bl Devnath October 16, 2014 at 1:50 PM Yes, entertain us they do. Simple but beautiful. 7 I feel for you. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 9:36 PM Thank you so much BL! You're such a nice friend.:) have a great day! Love and light! xxxxx D.

Jan Allison October 15, 2014 at 7:07 PM I love the structure of the form with the repeated lines Dorian - you inspire me with your creativity:-) hugs jan xxx Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2014 at 9:24 PM Thank you Jan! Glad you liked the repeated lines. Lol. ... Love and light! Xxxx D.

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2014 at 3:32 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, entertainment is great from a very good movie..Thanks for the visits by my page..Sara

Gary Bateman October 14, 2014 at 2:20 PM D, A most interesting subject here on the modern movies and the entertainment industry today -- such as it is. A Great Write too, and I find the use of the "Pantoum" poetic style to be interesting. I've never tried that one yet, but it looks like the way you structured your subject and write melded well with the structure of the Pantoum-type verse. Looks like you're experimenting with different verse types as I am. Again, a most interesting approach my dear and a "7" too from me. Cheers, Gary