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Entering the World

I open the front door The sun cascades over the trees And glances off my BMW One press of the button The door opens gracefuly The window slides down quitely Its time for work As I enter my world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2016 8:45:00 PM
CHRISTOPHER, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:07:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2009 11:10:00 PM
Nice write and welcome to poetry soup, James
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Date: 5/16/2009 12:21:00 PM
The imagery in the piece is excellent. I like the thought of stepping into a new world. The essence of the poem is industrious. Great job and welcome to the Soup! ~Joseph
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