Entering the World

I open the front door
The sun cascades over the trees
And glances off my BMW

One press of the button
The door opens gracefuly
The window slides down quitely
Its time for work
As I enter my world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 11:05 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:45 PM
CHRISTOPHER, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 11:10 PM
Nice write and welcome to poetry soup, James
Spence Sr Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 12:21 PM
The imagery in the piece is excellent. I like the thought of stepping into a new world. The essence of the poem is industrious. Great job and welcome to the Soup! ~Joseph
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