Entering Dangerous Zone

Some situations and persons can shine as gold
Dazzling with a shiny spark, blinding the eyes
Omitting the faults and red flags to be considered
Entering a dangerous zone where there is no return
Wishing to exit and escape from a deceitful trap
Desiring to see beyond the false appearances
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Day Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:24 AM
I found your poem well written and I thoroughly enjoyed the message. The idiom is creative and fit the theme of the poem very well. The contest was highly competitive which left out about 10 poems which were worthy of placement – including this one. As a matter of fact, if could list 15 places, you would make the list. Thanks for entering the contest and I will check out some more of your creative work!
Negron Flores Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Jesse. It was an interesting contest.
Neumann Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 3:55 AM
Toxic people stay toxic, however much they try to deceive us...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Indeed Kai
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:27 PM
The idiom well explained Nayda. Good luck.
Negron Flores Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Jean
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