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Enter the Angel

I have been stricken with the feeling of life Her luminescence reaches to the inner most weak parts of me as she smiles i feel the worlds rotation as if were one the colors of earth turn to nothing while she radiates vividness from within The feeling of a complete and utter loss of all reality ive never been more entranced by such an angel the angel strips me of all my walls my strongholds crumble this being that came to be mine from the heavens above the last piece to the jigsaw of life my daughter my precious I created this child She brings out the best of me The diamond in the rough no longer hidden away I am so thankful i see her everyday 9/6/2015

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Date: 9/14/2015 10:49:00 AM
A beautiful piece and a great win Robert...congrats Tim
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Robert Lewis
Date: 9/17/2015 11:58:00 PM
thank you
Date: 9/13/2015 10:00:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT
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Robert Lewis
Date: 9/17/2015 11:59:00 PM
thanks skat
Date: 9/12/2015 4:38:00 AM
Lovely tribute to ur dear daughter Robert! Congrats on big win!
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Robert Lewis
Date: 9/18/2015 12:00:00 AM
thanks

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