Enter the Angel

I have been stricken with the feeling of life 
Her luminescence reaches to the inner most weak parts of me 
as she smiles i feel the worlds rotation as if were one 
the colors of earth turn to nothing while she radiates vividness from within 
The feeling of a complete and utter loss of all reality 
ive never been more entranced by such an angel 
the angel strips me of all my walls my strongholds crumble 
this being that came to be mine from the heavens above 
the last piece to the jigsaw of life 
my daughter my precious I created this child 
She brings out the best of me 
The diamond in the rough no longer hidden away 
I am so thankful i see her everyday

9/6/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:49 AM
A beautiful piece and a great win Robert...congrats Tim
Lewis Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 11:58 PM
thank you
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September 13, 2015 at 10:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT
Lewis Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 11:59 PM
thanks skat
A. Sharma Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 4:38 AM
Lovely tribute to ur dear daughter Robert! Congrats on big win!
Lewis Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks
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