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ENTER NEOLINA

What a fabulous fish
What an awesome dish,
Neolina is her name,
And Flirting is her game.
She dives, shimmers,
Swims and flows,
She always smiles, 
Shines and glows,
And then she dips
To show her other side,
But Neolina is perfect,
And has nothing to hide!
Her colours are surreal,
And make the fish all feel,
That she is from 
Another world untold,
Where funky fish unfurl,
And octopuses multiply,
And continually unfold.
She’s sexy and she knows so,
She’s after Nemo as her beau,
She’s been closely watching,
And knows the qualities he has,
But of course, 
She knows, she’s the one 
With pizzazz!
We all know the story
About Nemo Marlin and Dory,
And how Nemo escaped danger,
From the Dentist stranger.
Neolina hears of Nemo’s escape,
And lets out a sigh,
And excitedly contemplates
What could be nigh!
However,
The crux of my tale,
Is about Marlin
Brewing a plot
To match Neolina, the surreal
Sassy fish,
With Nemo who is hot,
And his fantasies about
An incredible wedding,
On the reef where the sun,
Has a magnificent setting.
Every fish would be invited to come,
And imagine the fashions,
That would be
Sported by some!
Marlin practiced what he
Wanted to say,
To Nemo,
For many a day
And hopes it will
Be accepted by them.
He would make plans for
Their honeymoon,
And he thought of doing
This very soon,
But was afraid of been
Too rash,
He didn’t want to appear brash,
He might frighten or chase
Neolina away,
And Nemo might follow,
And choose not to stay.
But, Marlin was almost sure
If there was to be bet,
Each of them would admit
How they felt,
And both would burst out and say,
May we get married today!
Nemo our small Casanova,
Had spied Neolina once or twice,
And thought she was
Fabuliciously nice.
Marlin hoped they
Would be ecstatic to say I do,
Get married and have a child
Or a few!
Now we will just have to wait,
To see what will be their fate,
Will Marlins fantasies,
Come true
For these awesome two?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2018 1:37:00 AM
Fabulous, I loved this Jenny. Now they need to make a movie....Introducing Neolina! Kim
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Date: 10/2/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Kim. Neolina is special - she would make a great sequel to the Nemo, Marlin and Dory story! xoxo Jennifer
Date: 10/1/2018 6:17:00 PM
"Fabuliciously" is exactly how I felt about some women who attracted my attention, but fish, not so much. The trouble with fish seems to be which sex they will be today and tomorrow, but your from your words I shall assume love will conquer all! Aloha! rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/2/2018 6:06:00 AM
Yes, fish are a little complicated but I think Nemo is so famous he's exempt! Thanks Rico. Yes I would like believe that love conquers all. Yasou! Jennifer
Date: 10/1/2018 5:42:00 PM
What a lovely creative name, Neolina. I like it.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/2/2018 6:10:00 AM
Hi Pixie, What a lovely name "Pixie" love it! I thought Nemo had to have a girlfriend whose name would match his! thank you and best regards, xoxo Jennifer.
Date: 10/1/2018 1:44:00 PM
There's an innocence in your words...a clarity and beauty too...it would go well for kids with some pics...All the best Jennifer
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/2/2018 6:19:00 AM
Hi Artuto, I still have a lot of the child left in me! I have considered writing short children's stories. Perhaps one day soon I will start! Will take your advice about pics. as I illustrate all of my poems with my drawings. Many thanks for your comment Arturo, Kind regards, Jennifer.

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