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Enter Into the Light

I feel my soul I touch your strength We are not forgotten Like the ocean's of old The skies of new Can this be true Heaven awaits us May God bless me and you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Amelia for the thoughtful words. It is an afterlife poem on what it must be like when it is our time to go. I look forward to sharing more of my thoughts with such creative poets and writers.
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Date: 1/5/2018 8:27:00 PM
I have never seen an elegy before, and I'm glad this is the first one I saw! It is definitely rare, among rhymes and free verses, and I hope to see more of these! Other than the format, the story is short and sweet. Someone going on into the afterlife? The wording is amazing. Hope to see more from you in the future, and not just elegys. :)
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