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Now listen close to these tangles that we have involved in As we evolve now, I'm just hoping that i can last longer If I can program my mind into, as fast as a mind has ever gone before If I tell myself I will never win, then i will continue to lose in my sin But Thank GOD that Lo came to save me Even though I'm so sinful it's kinda crazy It's the definition of insanity Your talking to the man who answers you Along with these anthems that have been handed me Your trophy and proof of a better hand than me Now these can be like the Macabee's We can chase the end of the world and see who's at the end now Oh! there goes the after death, Now here comes the after life Just stay focused and don't ask your wife For a yes! for a no! or for a maybe just listen to these lullaby's like i was singing to a baby Name me! Please name me! If it's Timothy Blaine then it's all gravy Now these are not navies, these are not armories These are just the things that be trying to harm me Now evil can be like a swarm of bees You can look down on me but don't you try to swarm on me Now hold up! I'm not trying to be something I'm not, I'm just trying to see My kids by January Because December's looking very scary It's a hell of a month, it started out rough Now we're hitting up into a rough Now we're hitting into a sandpit Better get my sand wedge before i ban this Yes it's the whole world and it's the baddest System you ever been into now I'm saddened By the catastrophe that i have endured By the tragedy that i have supported

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/29/2012 8:15:00 AM
Bravo Timothy, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 8/16/2012 8:41:00 AM
Soup mail....luv...Linda
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Date: 8/16/2012 8:40:00 AM
Hello Timothy. I'm logging on just to direct you to one of my poems. it is called "The Clouds" its more of an epic thought. most of my poems have deep meaning... I'm not much of a faith Person. I'm a good person. Like you, I've been through so much no one would understand, the tragedy, catastrophe, can't always be blamed on this world...you really want to know which line of your on this poem is an eye opener. If I tell myself I will never win then I will continue to lose..I love that line....
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Date: 8/14/2012 11:28:00 AM
Timothy, you write very good - like your poem much. - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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