Entanglements

Now listen close to these tangles that we have involved in
As we evolve now, I'm just hoping that i can last longer
If I can program my mind into, as fast as a mind has ever gone before
If I tell myself I will never win, then i will continue to lose in my sin
But Thank GOD that Lo came to save me
Even though I'm so sinful it's kinda crazy
It's the definition of insanity
Your talking to the man who answers you
Along with these anthems that have been handed me
Your trophy and proof of a better hand than me
Now these can be like the Macabee's
We can chase the end of the world and see who's at the end now
Oh! there goes the after death, Now here comes the after life
Just stay focused and don't ask your wife
For a yes! for a no! or for a maybe
just listen to these lullaby's like i was singing to a baby
Name me! Please name me! If it's Timothy Blaine then it's all gravy
Now these are not navies, these are not armories
These are just the things that be trying to harm me
Now evil can be like a swarm of bees
You can look down on me but don't you try to swarm on me
Now hold up! I'm not trying to be
something I'm not, I'm just trying to see
My kids by January
Because December's looking very scary
It's a hell of a month, it started out rough
Now we're hitting up into a rough
Now we're hitting into a sandpit
Better get my sand wedge before i ban this
Yes it's the whole world and it's the baddest
System you ever been into now I'm saddened
By the catastrophe that i have endured
By the tragedy that i have supported
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 29, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Bravo Timothy, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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August 16, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Soup mail....luv...Linda
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August 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Hello Timothy. I'm logging on just to direct you to one of my poems. it is called "The Clouds" its more of an epic thought. most of my poems have deep meaning... I'm not much of a faith Person. I'm a good person. Like you, I've been through so much no one would understand, the tragedy, catastrophe, can't always be blamed on this world...you really want to know which line of your on this poem is an eye opener. If I tell myself I will never win then I will continue to lose..I love that line....
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August 14, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Timothy, you write very good - like your poem much. - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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