Entangled Webs

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Entangled Webs
Entangled webs we weave it seems
When a kindly friend lights a spark 
In a tormented frozen heart 
Planning romantic extreme schemes
Reasons to pursue wanton dreams
Secret whisperings in night’s dark
Entangled webs. 

Though starlight gleams and moon still beams
There are both hearts in shattered shards
From the start it was on the cards
The love once been will sheen in dreams
Entangled webs.

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7th November 2022

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Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jeff Keyser

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/22/2022 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Belle! :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/4/2022 5:00:00 PM

Many thanks Linda… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/21/2022 7:58:00 PM

A great poem. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/4/2022 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2022 3:12:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. It seems some romances are a tangled web. You have used to topic to create a unique idea. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Sara, sadly some romances go wrong for various reasons and then some become complex, an inspiring topic for poetry though… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/7/2022 5:18:00 AM

Very well crafted, Belle. I hope you have many better dreams that so they can make your nights more enjoyable. Even if it's just a dream, it's always nice to have your wishes come true.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2022 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, it’s just a fictional write for the contest inspired by the picture - but yes it’s nice to have dreams come true… Belle