Entangled Web

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in a world of magnificence and beauty of mystery and elegance resides the seed of greed the trace of evil the fabric of good in one mixed bag they coexist entwined as life on earth in its web entangled AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on February 28, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MARCH) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on October 1, 2019

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Susan Jeavons

Date: 10/2/2019 4:41:00 PM

Yes, good and evil do coexist We are free to choose which one we will follow. I like this poem Line! Blessings, Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/2/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated poem and comment, Susan.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2019 10:09:00 PM

You have penned the true world wide web here -- a mixed bag, all tangled up, as you put it! Cheers, Gershon (Soup Mail, please). ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/2/2019 6:56:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/1/2019 8:05:00 PM

It is greed that robs from us, the beauty and magnificence of our planet and one way or another, if it doesn't stop all humanity will suffer from this greed of a few - thank you Line - Lindsay

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2019 9:42:00 PM

Indeed so much backpeddling is in order. Seems a bit late for a good recovery.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/1/2019 11:33:00 AM

Good. There is also the existence of greed for getting everything free. People thik of the greed for money.I see it as an appetite and lust for what others have accomplished and any gains THEY created. And demanding it as theirs. To me, it's nuts!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/1/2019 4:34:00 PM

Yes indeed there are many types of greed. None are flattering.