Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Entangled Web

in a world
of magnificence
and beauty
of mystery
and elegance

resides the seed of greed
the trace of evil
the fabric of good
in one mixed bag

they coexist
entwined
as life on earth
in its web
entangled            



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

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Susan Jeavons October 2, 2019 at 4:41 PM Yes, good and evil do coexist We are free to choose which one we will follow. I like this poem Line! Blessings, Susan Line Gauthier October 2, 2019 at 7:57 PM Thanks for your much appreciated poem and comment, Susan.

Gershon Wolf October 1, 2019 at 10:09 PM You have penned the true world wide web here -- a mixed bag, all tangled up, as you put it! Cheers, Gershon (Soup Mail, please). ~ Gershon Line Gauthier October 2, 2019 at 6:56 AM Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Lindsay Laurie October 1, 2019 at 8:05 PM It is greed that robs from us, the beauty and magnificence of our planet and one way or another, if it doesn't stop all humanity will suffer from this greed of a few - thank you Line - Lindsay Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 9:42 PM Indeed so much backpeddling is in order. Seems a bit late for a good recovery.

Panagiota Romios October 1, 2019 at 11:33 AM Good. There is also the existence of greed for getting everything free. People thik of the greed for money.I see it as an appetite and lust for what others have accomplished and any gains THEY created. And demanding it as theirs. To me, it's nuts! Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 4:34 PM Yes indeed there are many types of greed. None are flattering.

Tom Cunningham October 1, 2019 at 10:12 AM Thought provoking Line, so much greed with so much evil in our world today. Tom Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 10:13 AM That's why it is so very important to notice the goodness to find balance.

Ann Foster October 1, 2019 at 10:02 AM ... a web... life and death... You are so great, this is written so well. Excellent words...Ann Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 10:13 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Ann.

P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 9:40 AM This is deep stuff, and clearly and elegantly expressed.

Caren Krutsinger October 1, 2019 at 9:22 AM This too is one of my FAVs from you, Line. Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 9:37 AM Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.