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Enough To Make You Weep

We, have the right to curtail life, death was their call.. murder the young,unborn; All lied... the trickle became a torrent.. but no one cried but God.... We, have the right to curtail life, death again,they call.. murder the old,long-born; All lies... the trickle will be a torrent.. no one cries.. but God

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 9:50:00 PM

yes, I sure remember this insightful one. Congrats in pd's contest, Brian.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2012 9:28:00 AM

congrats Brian on an excellent win for this brilliant creative work of art luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2012 6:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2012 10:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Brian. All new life deserves a chance.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2012 10:23:00 PM

BRIAN.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2012 3:37:00 AM

Yeah no one cries but God..So very deep Brian..Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:47:00 PM

VERY nicely done, Brian. What a great ending line: no one cries. . . but God. a profound statement in your poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2012 6:12:00 PM

Sad that this is happening everyday..God equates it with murder..Great topic and presentation..My diamond is still in the rough but thank God it is going to be a gem someday..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/19/2012 5:17:00 PM

sadly very true, great verse Brian, thank you for my placement, love Elizabeth