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Enough

I will die
here at the doorsteps
of your heart wondering
why you let
me come so
close and yet you kept
me so
distant

A wall of
ice and glass
prevents me from
any
further move

Gasping for my
last
breathe I am
left
to guess what it takes for
you
to give up plans and
schemes and
surrender
to love

When you will 
finally
open that door my
corpse
will greet you
frozen and you will not
be
able to ever
resuscitate me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/17/2011 1:51:00 PM
Holy Sweet Tapdancing Christ, Rosanna, are you positive that you have to feel so badly about this? This isn't to say that the poem is bad, because it isn't (though the format could be better,) just that it seems too intense. Anyway, gave me a chill at the last stanza, good write.  -KMD
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Rosanna Tarsiero
Date: 11/18/2011 7:25:00 AM
AHAHHAHAHAH I use my poems as an outlet for all those feelings that our society deems to be not "positive enough" for their massive positive thinking delusion. Thank you for the compliment.

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