Enough

Isn’t it enough that her eyes are golden,
that her lips are so rare
and has silky milkweed hair,
that all these things are true?
Isn’t it enough that her face glows,
moonbeams on my cosmic sea,
binary system destiny,
that gravity works two ways?
Isn’t it enough that her voice fits nicely
with the sound of my name,
that her smile is unashamed
and I am still inspired? 
Isn’t it enough we share the same stars,
alike in spirit and needs,
infinite time in between
but not enough time on Earth?
Isn’t it enough that she has envious hips,
that her presence reflects me
as surely as her heart rejects me,
isn’t it enough that she’s gone?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/18/2019 5:41:00 PM
Hello Phil, she left you. Maybe she needs time to think. another door will open when the time is right. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/9/2019 6:28:00 PM
G'day Phil … sometimes enough is not enough, however as one door closes another opens and life goes on - nicely written Phil - Lindsay
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Date: 5/9/2018 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, although much sadness,, but a poem about one aspect of life..you write it so well....
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Date: 5/6/2018 3:58:00 AM
Your word bleeds your pain, a really beautiful piece of poetry it is, that is life, it will go on, no matter what happens, your life was going before such person come into your life and your life will go on even without that person, it s not enough,unless we complete our time on this Earth it shall never be enough, perhaps she wasn t your twin flame, twin flame are suppose to stay together no matter what happens and such person will definitely come to your life, good luck for the contest
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/6/2018 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Faraz for the kind words and thoughts. Glad you liked it. Namaste.
Date: 5/5/2018 5:41:00 AM
Your heart has painted the perfect picture of your object of desire my friend, WW. Be certain this process will be repeated with more success next time! I PROMISE my friend! Haha!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/6/2018 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios, I look forward to that. Namaste.
Date: 5/3/2018 1:11:00 PM
Hello Phil, you sound sad in this poem. yes I sense the sadness. I am thinking she was not meant for you. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2018 1:31:00 PM
You need to talk ,I will listen, only if you want to.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Dar, you may be right. ;)
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