Ennui of Serenity (Rewrite)

Flowers, delicate, serene flowers
Bah- 
Give me something with power!
Roar of fighting cats,
An eagle soaring toward prey,
A black cloud of vampire bats!

The happy, tinkling bells 
of a winter sleigh,
Nay-

Give me a wolf's prowling howl
A hurricane come to land!
The hyena eating a thing so foul,
Nature in the raw, wholly unplanned!

* Inspired by Poetry Soup's own Ashok Niyogi  and his poem ENNUI

Honorable Mention in "My Inspiration" contest by  Deborah Guzzi

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Congratulations Amy, on your win with your inspired poem. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:18 AM
HOORAY for your HM and congrats Awesome Amy for placing in Debbie's contest with this great write from your inspiration piece.. enjoy another victory dance my friend... bring the horse.. so we all can dance..with luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 8:28 AM
Congrats on the HM win, Amy
K. Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Enjoyed the contrasts you put here, Amy-- definitely not boring! --nikko :)
Milgate Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Poem that honors life, real life. Good job, very lively and the flow and movement in your poem is great. Can hear your voice.
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Nature in the raw, wholly unplanned. What a wonderful expression, Amy
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June 2, 2010 at 2:09 AM
no quiet life for you, eh! this is different and i like it a lot harry
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