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Enlightment



                 fuchsia flower blooms
                in the park near Gazebo
                     enlightens the day

Heidi Sands

5/30/24

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Gershon Wolf

June 10, 2024 at 7:48 PM

I like your 'take' on 'Enlightenment!' Cheers! ~ Lighten and Brighten, Gershon

Heidi Sands

June 10, 2024 at 7:53 PM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your comments. Have a nice night :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 30, 2024 at 4:45 PM

Very beautiful Haiku!

Heidi Sands

May 30, 2024 at 8:21 PM

Thank you very much :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 30, 2024 at 11:01 AM

Hello Heidi, those floswers would be a beautiful scene in a park garden. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 30, 2024 at 3:19 PM

Hello Heidi, Yes they are pretty flowers. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

May 30, 2024 at 12:53 PM

Yes Darlene. They are so pretty! Thank you. Hugs :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 30, 2024 at 10:13 AM

Dear Heidi, I loved how your delicate haiku captures the simple beauty of nature with elegant precision. The vibrant "fuchsia flower" blooming near the park's gazebo conjures a tranquil scene. Your deft minimalism illuminates the enlightening power found in life's small wonders. This gem shines with peaceful insight and a painter's eye for detail. Exquisite! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Heidi Sands

May 30, 2024 at 12:51 PM

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your kind feedback. I hope alll is well and you have a beautiful day :)

Paula Goldsmith

May 30, 2024 at 10:02 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Enlightment" write. Pretty flowers make any day a great day. Hugs.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........

Heidi Sands

May 30, 2024 at 12:48 PM

Thank you sobmuch, my friend!! I am happy you enjoyed this I hope you have a blessed day. Hugs :)

Deb M

May 30, 2024 at 7:46 AM

How a simple thing of natures beauty like beautiful fuschia flowers can brighten and enlighten ones mood or day! You conveyed that beautifully Heidi in so few words! Lovely....Debx

Heidi Sands

May 30, 2024 at 8:36 AM

You sure are right how these beautiful flowers can brighten the day. Thank you Deb. I hope all is well. I am very busy lately with not much time to be here at soup, but I will be back to catch up more . I hope you have a great day :)

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