Enlightment

fuchsia flower blooms in the park near Gazebo enlightens the day Heidi Sands 5/30/24 (C)opyright

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2024 7:48:00 PM

I like your 'take' on 'Enlightenment!' Cheers! ~ Lighten and Brighten, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2024 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your comments. Have a nice night :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/30/2024 4:45:00 PM

Very beautiful Haiku!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2024 8:21:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2024 11:01:00 AM

Hello Heidi, those floswers would be a beautiful scene in a park garden. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2024 3:19:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Yes they are pretty flowers. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2024 12:53:00 PM

Yes Darlene. They are so pretty! Thank you. Hugs :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/30/2024 10:13:00 AM

Dear Heidi, I loved how your delicate haiku captures the simple beauty of nature with elegant precision. The vibrant "fuchsia flower" blooming near the park's gazebo conjures a tranquil scene. Your deft minimalism illuminates the enlightening power found in life's small wonders. This gem shines with peaceful insight and a painter's eye for detail. Exquisite! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2024 12:51:00 PM

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your kind feedback. I hope alll is well and you have a beautiful day :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 10:02:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Enlightment" write. Pretty flowers make any day a great day. Hugs.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2024 12:48:00 PM

Thank you sobmuch, my friend!! I am happy you enjoyed this I hope you have a blessed day. Hugs :)

Deb M

Date: 5/30/2024 7:46:00 AM

How a simple thing of natures beauty like beautiful fuschia flowers can brighten and enlighten ones mood or day! You conveyed that beautifully Heidi in so few words! Lovely....Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2024 8:36:00 AM

You sure are right how these beautiful flowers can brighten the day. Thank you Deb. I hope all is well. I am very busy lately with not much time to be here at soup, but I will be back to catch up more . I hope you have a great day :)