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Enlightenment in an instant

Held captive in space and taunted by time, impressions graze soul as senses entwine, where recognition dawns betwixt love’s chime, in that instant when head and heart align. Blink and we’ll miss it, that flicker in space, beheld if our ego, we but let go, whereupon the veil lifts admitting grace, revealing our being, pristine like snow. Soundless thunder rising from down under, lights in our soul’s presence, love’s bliss incense, imbibed by our heart in childlike wonder; that rapture borne by divine effulgence. Enlightenment: when does the tumbler fall; in as that instant, birthing a bliss squall?

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Date: 1/23/2025 12:58:00 PM
Your wisdom "enlightens" your sonnet in the sense that in an "instant" thoughts and feelings, head and heart, ego and humility, body and being can align in an unforgettable moment of bliss. Wonderful use of tumblers in a lock falling into place as a metaphor! Best wishes for the contest, Seeker as you are a pilgrim always in search of alignment. Blessings for your journey!!
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Date: 1/23/2025 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Sam.
Date: 1/23/2025 11:23:00 AM
I was hoping but no. Though, the second to last stanza was close. I really liked that one. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/23/2025 6:10:00 PM
The Tao that can be named is not the real Tao. I’m happy you enjoyed, Benjamin.

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