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Enlightenment

Every now and again you look at me from the corner of your eyes and give a teasing smile, Are you playing with me or falling in love? Like a fisherman reeling in his catch, you have me hooked and I thrash about holding on to my last breath. As the mist at dawn rises and takes over the landscape blurring the vision, My yearning for you is leading me astray. Lost haplessly in your thoughts I seek deliverance like a mendicant seeking enlightenment. ~A Brian Strand contest

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Date: 3/29/2018 10:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul. Well done.
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Date: 3/29/2018 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this cleverly written poem!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/30/2018 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 3/29/2018 3:09:00 PM
This fine poem brings me into the emotional turmoil it describes so well! Congrats on your win, Abdul. :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/30/2018 11:47:00 AM
Appreciate your comment very much, Laura. Thanks

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