Enlightened

There’s no hope for humanity
A half-wit would think otherwise.
Collective Christianity
With its many brethren allies
Have failed its purpose for Christ’s sake!
With their arsenal of prayer beads,
Missals and psalms- they are opaque
Tools employed that never succeeds
In changing the nature of Man:
He is still greedy and hostile
Unchanged since first set foot on land
They’re members of this rank and file:
A congregate hypocrisy
Only the enlightened can see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 5, 2010 at 7:29 AM
Powerful and raw and well done, very thought provoking, greed to me is the essense of all wars, and failures of man in this world. In my enlightened mind, I seek peace and tranquility in my life, I cannot change the world, but perhaps even to inspire one person to see peace is the way, is a good thing...love Constance
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