Enlightened

Said this a million mountains away from you that I am the ambiguous aunt you never knew.
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Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:53 AM
A million plus spaces we fail to inhabit. Perhaps your words will cause the mountains to crumble.
Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Dear Lioness, your poetic expression and imagery is beautiful in its brevity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
One Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:47 AM
I hope the reunion was fun.. Congratulations on your placement.
Onpaper Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Omg aunty is soooo happy!!! Thank u brothaaaa !!! I hope my nieces accept this truth!!! I am aunty! XD
Mcintosh Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 7:59 AM
lovely. God bless you, much love, Gina
Sharma  Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Wow, I love this, lol!! "Million mountains away from you", " Ambiguous aunt" Ahhann, this is definitely a creative one-liner and I absolutely love the wordplay with alliteration.. Flows really well! Best of luck to you for the contest, you nailed it!!
Rhymes Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:50 AM
lol hello aunty … ??
Empress Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Lolol well well! Aunty papi! You are arent you ambiguous! How creative is this enlightened monoku! I am in awe! Maybe the mountains need to let your voice to flow through! Hey! Goodluck for the contest papi. Nailed it
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