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Enlightened

Said this a million mountains away from you that I am the ambiguous aunt you never knew.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2024 7:53:00 AM

A million plus spaces we fail to inhabit. Perhaps your words will cause the mountains to crumble.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 7:13:00 PM

Dear Lioness, your poetic expression and imagery is beautiful in its brevity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:47:00 AM

I hope the reunion was fun.. Congratulations on your placement.

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 10/19/2023 11:55:00 AM

Omg aunty is soooo happy!!! Thank u brothaaaa !!! I hope my nieces accept this truth!!! I am aunty! XD

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/17/2023 7:59:00 AM

lovely. God bless you, much love, Gina

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/17/2023 6:55:00 AM

Wow, I love this, lol!! "Million mountains away from you", " Ambiguous aunt" Ahhann, this is definitely a creative one-liner and I absolutely love the wordplay with alliteration.. Flows really well! Best of luck to you for the contest, you nailed it!!

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 10/17/2023 6:50:00 AM

lol hello aunty … ??

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 6:48:00 AM

Lolol well well! Aunty papi! You are arent you ambiguous! How creative is this enlightened monoku! I am in awe! Maybe the mountains need to let your voice to flow through! Hey! Goodluck for the contest papi. Nailed it