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Enlighten Us

When and how does the tumbler fall,
enabling our shift into sleep,
enlivening dreams we recall,
except for state of slumber deep,
greeted at morn, with a bliss squall?
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Skinner Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 9:11 AM
No, I was not familiar but, superconciousness sounds delightful. I seek getting to deeper levels. Why do you ask?
Seeker Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 6:01 PM
:)
Skinner Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Great imagery. I can see your poem's environment and love it. Also "taloned and dunking beak", fun pic in my head. Bravo
Seeker Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 8:49 AM
Thank you, Skinner. So you are familiar with the term ‘turiya’?
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