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When and how does the tumbler fall, enabling our shift into sleep, enlivening dreams we recall, except for state of slumber deep, greeted at morn, with a bliss squall?

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Date: 9/11/2024 9:11:00 AM
No, I was not familiar but, superconciousness sounds delightful. I seek getting to deeper levels. Why do you ask?
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Date: 9/11/2024 6:01:00 PM
:)
Date: 9/11/2024 8:34:00 AM
Great imagery. I can see your poem's environment and love it. Also "taloned and dunking beak", fun pic in my head. Bravo
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Date: 9/11/2024 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Skinner. So you are familiar with the term ‘turiya’?

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