Enlighten Me Please

enlighten me please you told me I am the best why then put me down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Samandar Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 3:04 AM
I enjoyed this poem because it reflects a common passage which effects the majority of us. Well done!
Chikandamina Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Direct to the core, very nice
Poet Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 2:26 AM
Very nice Senryu here Carol.Enjoyed.
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 10:21 AM
I like the shortness and simplicity here. Underneath, I sense an urgency of feeling. Thank you for sharing.
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Confusing message that one is delivering..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Neels Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 11:45 AM
love the question you pose here Carol.. hope your weekend is a good one ;) love Wilma
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