Enlighten Me Please

enlighten me please you told me I am the best why then put me down

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Moses Samandar

Date: 1/9/2012 3:04:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem because it reflects a common passage which effects the majority of us. Well done!

Justice Chikandamina

Date: 12/21/2011 2:34:00 PM

Direct to the core, very nice

Kash Poet

Date: 12/13/2011 2:26:00 AM

Very nice Senryu here Carol.Enjoyed.

Careyanna Adams

Date: 12/11/2011 10:21:00 AM

I like the shortness and simplicity here. Underneath, I sense an urgency of feeling. Thank you for sharing.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2011 1:10:00 PM

Confusing message that one is delivering..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/10/2011 11:45:00 AM

love the question you pose here Carol.. hope your weekend is a good one ;) love Wilma