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Enlighten Me Please

enlighten me please you told me I am the best why then put me down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Moses Samandar
Date: 1/9/2012 3:04:00 AM
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I enjoyed this poem because it reflects a common passage which effects the majority of us. Well done!
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Justice Chikandamina
Date: 12/21/2011 2:34:00 PM
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Direct to the core, very nice
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Kash Poet
Date: 12/13/2011 2:26:00 AM
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Very nice Senryu here Carol.Enjoyed.
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Careyanna Adams
Date: 12/11/2011 10:21:00 AM
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I like the shortness and simplicity here. Underneath, I sense an urgency of feeling. Thank you for sharing.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2011 1:10:00 PM
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Confusing message that one is delivering..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Wilma Neels
Date: 12/10/2011 11:45:00 AM
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love the question you pose here Carol.. hope your weekend is a good one ;) love Wilma
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