Enlighten Me

What am i

trapped in my own body

and them mediums to set me free.

to my fortress of comfort

in mine dimension .

mine creation of peace

mine to meditate and free me fully

to my desolate chamber of discovery

my very own doom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 3:12 PM
You are God's child and you will become the best that you can be..Thanks for stopping by...Yes, we think of vultures as a repulsive bird but they do a necessary job to keep our world clean..I do enjoy watching them soar..Sara
Claudine Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 11:53 AM
i fear who i can become, that is my greatest fear.
Bagnall Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 8:09 AM
I was doing quite well with this one, you lost me at the last two lines, interesting, but left me confused as to the meaning.
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