Enjoying Winter's Sparkling Wonderland

I enter the outside crystal palace
into winter’s magnificent display
where wild and free imaginations place
importance; and inspiring thoughts convey
a higher meaning in nature’s own way.
Snow sparkles squint vision with sunlight’s ray.

A power delaying comprehension
of beauty and splendor for the pilgrim.
Adjusted eyes view nature’s invention
like a child with an enormous prism,
or poem with elaborate rhythm;
fresh powdered snow’s sensationalism.

It seems a shame to spoil snow’s smooth surface
with footprints moving any direction,
or even with straight lines made on purpose.
They damage winter’s glorious perfection,
disrupting morning’s sunlight reflection
with remnants of a lover’s affection.

Forgive, sparkling wonderland, my footprints deep
That cut into and marred your beauty steep!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Very creative and expressive work. I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad that I chose it to read. Sara
Greene Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Your enjoyment is my fulfillment. Thank you for your kind words.
Nicole Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts leave me breathless. Even if I wanted to, I would never glide along the glistening beauty of these words. Fall deeply in nature's white confetti. The sweet touch of snow. This painting that you have created, is beautiful. I only wish to cherish the moment. ~ Brandy
Greene Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:50 AM
Yes, fresh snow is a painting. Nothing can be done to improve it--we only scar its delicate tissue. Thank you again for your kind words. - Gerry
Green Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Beautifully written and expressed Gerald. Nice flow and a fantastic scene you have created. Best wishes in the contest
Greene Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Thanks. I do enjoy sonnets.
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