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Enjoying the Sunshine

Autumn echoes slowly fade
As Winter footsteps are seen
Natures spirit tamely sleeps.

Brisk wind whined as the magic
Of the feathery snow spins,
Home warm walls keep day chill out.

Sun's outstretch scattered bright rays,
Blending orange-red streaks clouds
Poise over blue free heaven.

Kids dressed warm with wet mittens,
Looking proud of their snowman
With carrot nose and twig-arms.

1/6/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
One Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Lovely poem dear Eve, but not much sunshine around at the moment, unless you are in Australia.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:53 AM
Alas I have never built a snowman. Must be fun, hugs.
Sharma  Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 10:48 PM
Awwn, what an adorable poem this is, beautiful Eve! This made my heart melt in the saccharine cadence of magical melodies that your words have woven.."Winter footsteps", "Of the feathery snow spins"Ahh, this gives me the feeling of Disney movie 'Frozen' and that snowman looks like the character Olaf from it..:)"Sun's outstretch scattered bright rays,Blending orange-red streaks clouds"What an enchanting wordsmithery you've presented here, dear poetess.This was a mystical read!Sending love & light
Cunningham Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 8:41 PM
We haven't had any snow yet but they say it's on the way, I won't be out building snowmen, the grandsons are old enough to build their own now lol. Hope you're keeping well Eve and a very happy new year to you. Tom
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