Enjoying Love So Undeserving

What sustains Life like water? What is as fresh and welcoming like the countryside? And as sweet as a newly made confectionery baked with honey? I just found one well placed in all corners of your heart. A feeling encompassing the goodness of life. Is it the blissful visitation to the tenants of the deep blue sea? Or a radiant rainbow floating in the moist skies? Is it red roses, milk Sunflowers and other colorful plants in pink, green and yellow? Or the site of a happy set of little quintuplet siblings? Is it the baby chicks peeping out from their nest to spy on the first morning rising sun? They all are no where near the unbelievable goodness of your love. Sweetheart! You are a majestic glamor full of gracious providence. Not even the magneting beauty of the Queen Cleopatra can be compared to the pillars of your virtues which prove to overcome time's curfew eclipsing my heart totally as I soak in the foam of your passions. A natural habitat have I found in the gardens of your affection and a new existence from the deep baptism of your unequaled care. I never believed a star could be as near but here I am; with a being who outshines a galaxy. My soul has lost records of its bountiful happiness from this train of love with the wish its rails are never ending and its journey, everlasting.
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Mac Donald Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Ah, the title doesn't seem to truly relate to the subject...somewhat of a paradox, Funom.:) Still, the recipient will be overwhelmed by its beauty. Wonderful imagery and metaphors! Sunny, warm and breezy here, much like this write. Keep well and wishing you "bountiful happiness"! Mikki
Makama Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Thanks a lot Michelle. I am so sorry for taking so long to reply. I hope you are doing great.
Horsman Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:43 AM
we have a poet here , that write so beautiful just as you do,,so pleased I am,, you are truly a soulful person,,and reading what you write, is inspiring,,,thank you.....
Makama Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much harry horsman
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Someone's definitely in love ;). Light & Love
Makama Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Thanks Debbie Guzzi.. I am sooooo much in Love
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Faving this Funom! I've been so busy, missed out on so much great poetry; yours especially! --- we have the same spirit, if I am so honored... You serve the Sonship well! Love Always, your brother Keith :-)
Makama Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Woow! Keith, I am indeed so so speechless. Thanks for u wonderful words..
Lamoureux Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:54 AM
I am enjoying a second read. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Makama Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Thanks a lot Richard... You are always a source of encouragement.
Kos Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:17 PM
So beautiful, magic and charming. This definitely delivers a peaceful sentiment which I truly like. Superbly written piece. I like it.
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Thanks a lot... Your words add more value to my humble piece.
Adams Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:27 AM
absolutely beautiful poem... your images are so vivid and beautiful! lovely write! :)
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra Adams.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
This makes me think of Solomon's love poetry. Masterfully expressed.
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Oh goodness! Your comment is full of flattery. Thanks a lot Richard. You have always been a source of encouragement!
Harrell Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:27 PM
You just be well behaved and you are okay! Enjoyed your write, Funom! Your words are shiny like ice. It keeps me cool and refreshed while it is also a reflection of you :)
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Wooow! I am short of words Toguyen... Thanks a lot for your encouragement.
Gibson Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 7:05 PM
First visit to your poetry and I am not disappointed. So lovely.
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Ohh Faye Gibson... Thanks a lot, I hope I give you better impressions with more of my lines.
Macfarlane Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Wow Fuuom....this is an incredible tribute to love, the object of your affections is extremely lucky. Beautifully written! Hugs
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Thanks a lot Cecilia
Guzzi Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 4:46 PM
So wholesomely loving, such joy and restraint at the same time a poem to be read aloud and valued until the end of days by your love. Thank you for your kind visits to my verses. Light & Love
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Thanks for your golden words.. I really appreciate it Debbie Guzzi
Toil Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:54 PM
No, Funom, you richly deserve this love. I hope it will last and that he deserves the bounty of your beautiful heart. You pour your soul here, with courage, for all to see and it is indeed lovely! We need more people on this planet like you. Peace...Sam
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Ohhh Sam Toil... Thanks a lot for your sweet words.. I am actually a "he" and the poem is to a very very sweet "she"
Torres Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:23 PM
WOW.. this is one superb write, Funom!!! very impressive lines... and the theme.. from the nature, people, love and life... You gave them life in one masterpiece write!! .. :O)) OXOX..
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Thanks a lot AiyaH De Torres
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