Enjoyable

(E)vening sunsets (N)ights in summer (J)ust a slight breeze (O)ut on the porch (Y)ellow flowers blooming (A)ll around you and I (B)right smiles beaming (L)ost in moments tied together (E)very embrace we share Heidi Sands 4/6/17

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Jeremy Smith

Date: 5/9/2017 7:22:00 PM

It seems to be, your in love very nice. Another gift given to us by God.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/9/2017 7:23:00 PM

Actually that was a fictional write. Thank you very much for your comment. Love is the gift given to us by God! :)

Roy Pett

Date: 4/8/2017 5:47:00 AM

Brilliant certainly enjoyable to read, great acrostic Heidi, Roy. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/8/2017 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Roy. Happy you enjoyed it :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/7/2017 1:22:00 PM

ENJOYABLE...

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2017 1:24:00 PM

Thank you :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/7/2017 8:16:00 AM

This is so sweet and beautiful Heidi. I could picture myself having that moment. Another great acrostic, in it goes. :) :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Edward. :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/7/2017 5:56:00 AM

Another beautiful and serene poem that feels so comforting to read. The titled of your poem is what your poem is to me, enjoyable and so much more.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2017 8:00:00 AM

Hi Chris. I am happy you enjoyed it :) Thank you.