Enjoy To Fish, Fish To Enjoy

In a canoe casting with a weighted rubber worm Felt something aggressive thing hit my hook Up it came through the water’s surface And shot up more than three feet in the air. After some displays of acrobatic leaps and drives, I finally got him at the side of my canoe Banging, thrashing like a bobcat in a box, Whispered, “Hello, I believe in catch and release” The bass stopped thrashing, listened intently Then said, “never thought I’d meet one like you” I grabbed the mighty fish by the lower jaw Holding it up for a closer look. removed the hook. Wiggled off to parts unknown of the cool lake It was happy to be free, I was happy to catch.center> +++++++++ Date: March 7, 2014 Free Verse 12th Place win Contest : by Caleb Smith
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Beam Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on win Ram and thanks for comment on poem and I am more of a catch and eat fishermen.I hope you have good day
Whispers Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 4:38 AM
congrats Dr. Ram! You did it again!
Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:11 PM
originality at its best, dr. ram.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:11 PM
this is really nice, and how you released that fish back to the water. Congrats for your win.
May Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Great write and win Dr Ram...congrats
A. Sharma Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Great write for the theme ! Congrats Dr. Ram !
Kos Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:38 PM
Congratulations on this well deserverd win with a beautifully penned poem on fishing, Sr!
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April 29, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Dr Ram, . Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA"
Phookan Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 5:38 AM
Hello Dr Ram, sorry haven't been to reading any new poems or commenting,, after my last contest had every mind to quit souping for some time. All owing to bad time management on my part.. I came back to read your work. And do I appreciate that gesture! That's so thoughtful , takes a kind heart to release its victim( the poor fish here). I see a nice poem with interesting dialogue between the two. Regards, gautami
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:05 PM
This is REALLY good!! Love how you let him go. Just a suggestion on the title. Enjoy Fishing is the way we say it but fish to enjoy in the second part is definitely the right way.
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:28 PM
i love the way you portait it, Dr. Ram...i can clearly view the scene..it turned me back to a happy memories of fishing with my brother...I love that experience!! thank you for sharing it to us...gl in the contest!!! ..^__^
Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:13 AM
A great one Dr., I must say I really enjoy it.Immense thanks for all your visits to my page.
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