Enjoy Life Like Animals

Saw 
two birds,
beak touching
beak in mid air.
Animals enjoy life better than us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Animals enjoy life better than us." So True. Have a blessed day.................
Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Awesome write, Rama, but I was asking for a poem with no replies whatsoever. Congrats for placing in my contest nonetheless!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:28 PM
This was not what I wanted to submit or rather I would say I submitted something else. How it changed I don't know. Sorry about this.
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November 20, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Sweet imagery, if only humans were like this...
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Yes if only we enjoyed life without thinking negative and making best use of time.
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