Enigmatic Woman

Incredible Woman

Her essence is majestic, 
Her freshness of the dewy light of life
The memory of this woman
       burns bright with love in my heart
The phenomenon is just as majestic
                         Perfect queen
                                I loved her

Queen? Oh, more than that, yes
She is otherworldly
Who is she? I don’t know 
But I still know her

She isn’t demonic, nor angelic
More
More, much more

Memory gives me soul
Yes, to continue to live with her in spirit

In imagination, she kills me from one thousand miles
Yes, I feel I am slowly turning to ash 
What did you do with me? what?
I can’t see, I can’t feel anything

Only you, you, I can feel only you. Just
I feel you. Always. There isn’t a distance

I feel I can not believe it. You created it. I feel
I can thank you for this. Amazing woman. 
You are not my life. But I feel now life
Thank
You

Please, stay in my heart
You are my life
The breath

I love
You, perfect woman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Peranteau Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 1:58 PM
I think you used thuh wrong werd dear poet; "enigmatic"...yuh seem tuh know this woman quite well if'n yuh ask me...enjoy'd thuh write...ty...much love
Galyo Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 10:15 PM
Dear James, you are right, but it has been a while since I saw her, so a lot has changed since then. Thanks for the correction. I made a correction as a subtitle.
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