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In your eyes            huge vacuum                    sleazy                     step forward, says.                           implore forgiveness You strive for blandness.                         better way                                        endears                                                sightless saw                                                     a speck Fear query            hold you in shackles                              horrifyingly bruised                                him                                     as haystack needle. (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented Edward Ibah Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 03/27/2021

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Date: 3/27/2021 7:16:00 PM
I enjoyed “you strive for blandness”.
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Date: 3/27/2021 7:27:00 PM
Thanks Dear Caren, I hope you doing good, I missed your kind words. Warm hugs

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