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Enigma

Although a marvelous art of nature The woman remains a mystical creature For she cries and draws you near And her smiles will keep you there O! What pain you'll surely bear If you crush her heart in a lofty dare And in a manner seemingly restive Her subtle feats shall leave you pensive Yet in fallen grace, your most daunting day She whispers to you, 'It will be okay' Not as though she is first to say But it sways your tears anyway O woman, none can feel so much And none can heal with a gentle touch
----------------- Inspiration: Stories of Mae and Bruwaa

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2016 9:23:00 AM
I liked your special sonnets with tender scent of hope and attempt of understanding the ”Enigma”.In a world dominated by men but not always by reason, feelings bring us to significant reason many cases, thus to a mor human world.
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/20/2016 1:13:00 PM
Lovely comment, Ovidiu....... and yes, Without a woman's emotion, what would become of we..!
Date: 1/9/2016 7:53:00 AM
A marvellous tribute to women. I too am an admirer!
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/20/2016 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, Richard..... loved your works too!!
Date: 1/2/2016 8:57:00 PM
well written Wilfred...
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/4/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, white sage..... Nice name!
Date: 1/2/2016 8:39:00 AM
- A lovely sonnet, Wilfred - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 1/4/2016 3:02:00 PM
Happy new year, Anne Lise..... Thank you
Date: 12/26/2015 11:34:00 AM
This is a thing of loveliness. I admire your work. I have never attempted a sonnet. Maybe someday, WA?
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Robyn Campbell
Date: 12/28/2015 11:48:00 AM
:-) Yes.
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 12/28/2015 5:09:00 AM
Thanks, Robyn!!!...... Of course, any day any time..... We can piece one together
Date: 12/26/2015 10:08:00 AM
Great sonnet, SKAT
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 12/26/2015 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT A.... I cherish your views so much .... Merry Christmas!!!
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 12/26/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT A.... I cherish your views so much .... Merry Christmas!!!

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