Enigma

Enigma

He who has no name lies waiting in the echos
Of my mind waiting for slumber

He invades my dreams like a dog shaking a rat
Tormenting me until the dawn slips back into darkness 

Daylight keeps this vampire at bay though I feel his
Presence following me in the shadow

Seldom a day goes by when I dont hear his call
Sometimes far sometimes near

As the sun starts to set I feel him begin to move

They say the body needs eight hours of sleep
I’ll settle for less
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 15, 2025 at 4:16 PM
This poem is very powerful and creates a strong sense of dread. The metaphors of a "vampire" and a "dog shaking a rat" are incredibly effective at conveying a feeling of being tormented. The final line is especially impactful, highlighting the speaker's weary resignation.
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