Enharmonics

Air you breathe, hunger that sit
Fair you treat, thunder that skip
Hair like sheath, colored and lit
Snare as you beat, blunder over your slip
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Eslinger Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 12:19 AM
Well, hey there, Clifford. Just finished half hour homework checking on this dynamic piece.i cunclude loving your new word & esp how your poem uses term harmonics but involves all the senses, aural to inclusive of all partsi , dpainterly vision setting the mood for harnonic inclusion of all asoects. Superb writing, language painting.good to aee you
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May 7, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Thank you Miss Sally for your warm visit. :)
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