Enhancement

from the confinement 
of my comfort zone
my thoughts ascend 
to meet with yours ~
together we shall achieve 

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Bitesize Poem no.55 Poetry Contest
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© 14 November 2022
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Sambourne Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 8:13 AM
My thought + goal for this spring day - to meet a kindred spirit in joy, thought, and consideration. Best wishes, Brian
Callus Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Your positive comments are truly appreciated, Brian...thank you. ~ Regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 2:50 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. If two people put their thoughts together, what would they be able to achieve. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 12:32 PM
Thank you for the insightful comment, and for liking, Sara. Blessings and regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 2:13 AM
So uplifing. Well done, dear. Well done.
Callus Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, Eileen. What a pleasure it is to have you back on Soup! I too find it hard nowadays to dedicate much time to Soup...too many priorities in life! Take care. Hugs // paul
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:37 PM
Wonderful, Paul:)
Callus Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:46 PM
Thank you, Jo. It's lovely to have you stopping by. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 4:04 PM
what a lovely thought, my friend.
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 1:35 AM
Thank you, Andrea Best regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Such a poem of confined thoughts by a brilliant poet - well penned my friend, hope you are well, I have at last, unlike Humpty Dumpty, been glued together again. hugs, blessings and warm regards, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 1:43 AM
Thank you, Jenny; you are too kind. I am glad that at last you are in fine form again. Take care...warm regards, blessings and hugs, my friend // paul
Mcconnell Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Lovely penning Paul, good imagery and fine expression. Blessings,Gordon
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Your comments are much appreciated. Blessings, and enjoy the week ahead, my friend. // paul
Lawrence Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 10:37 PM
What lovely thoughts, embracing forward motion as two. Wonderful Paul! Big hugs and all good wishes to you xx Susan :)
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, dear Susan. Looking forward to your next post :) Warm regards & Hugs, my friend....and have a lovely weekend! // paul
Mcintosh Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 3:56 AM
Lovely. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Gina. Regards & blessings // paul
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 1:38 PM
Nice one Paul. Inspiring and strong :)
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 6:10 AM
I'm pleased you liked it, Heid; thank you. Best regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:50 AM
I like the uplifting tone of your poem, Paul. Best to you.
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul
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