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Engulfing Sadness

So gross is the scene Scattered tears of bleeding heart Heart stabbed and deceived My strength of bearing pain,sapped Lurking in oblivion * Empty handed life Drags me on a fiery path Smiles snatched from the face Destiny showed no mercy Engulfed me in a dark shroud for PD's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/22/2012 3:54:00 PM
Irfana, I'm glad to see you on the winners list with this one that I remember well. Congrats!
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Irfana. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:34:00 AM
congrats on your win! depressing piece...
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:33:00 PM
CONGRATS IRFANA ON A FABULOUS TANKA AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:54:00 AM
Irfana, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:44:00 AM
YOu did a good job for portraying sadness, Irfana. Good luck in PD's contest.
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