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and on a small stone upon a lonely hill a single name engraved . . . _________________________ September 30, 2012 Poetry/Monoku/engraved Copyright Protected, ID 09-424-549-30 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Singled Out Sponsored, Debbie Guzzi, Judged 11/12 First Place

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/25/2012 8:54:00 AM

You definitely have a way with words, painting a lonely scene so well.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/18/2012 11:00:00 AM

Nicely done with this monoku.love phyl

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/16/2012 7:16:00 AM

aww...you paint a sad picture of a neglected headstone... or rock as i read it again. open to various sad interpretations - I like it :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 1:34:00 PM

wow, such a powerful monoku, Constance. Happy Thanksgiving for tomorrow xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 8:43:00 AM

Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am starting to read what looks to be some exceptional writing this morning. So glad I was able to read yours Constance. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/30/2012 3:16:00 PM

This is a wonderful entry into Debbie's contest! I think this poem says a whole lot in very few words, a grand display of wonderment! I really enjoyed this powerful statement, Great Work!!