Constance La France Poet Monoku

Engraved

 

and on a small stone upon a lonely hill a single name engraved . . . 

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September 30, 2012


Poetry/Monoku/engraved
Copyright Protected, ID 09-424-549-30
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Singled Out 
Sponsored, Debbie Guzzi, Judged 11/12

First Place

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Joann Grisetti October 25, 2012 at 8:54 AM You definitely have a way with words, painting a lonely scene so well.

Phyllis Babcock October 18, 2012 at 11:00 AM Nicely done with this monoku.love phyl

Black Eyed Susan October 16, 2012 at 7:16 AM aww...you paint a sad picture of a neglected headstone... or rock as i read it again. open to various sad interpretations - I like it :)

Jack Horne October 7, 2012 at 1:34 PM wow, such a powerful monoku, Constance. Happy Thanksgiving for tomorrow xx

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 8:43 AM Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am starting to read what looks to be some exceptional writing this morning. So glad I was able to read yours Constance. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey September 30, 2012 at 3:16 PM This is a wonderful entry into Debbie's contest! I think this poem says a whole lot in very few words, a grand display of wonderment! I really enjoyed this powerful statement, Great Work!!