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Engaging Esmerelda

Her deep green eyes like jewels shone, in silver beams of Flower Moon. Emerald ring, a perfect stone, for deep green eyes of jewel tone. Oh, how he wished that May were gone! She danced for joy and dreamed of June! Her deep green eyes like jewels shone, in silver beams of Flower Moon. *Flower Moon is the full moon of May 5/7/2019

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Date: 8/6/2019 1:28:00 PM
Really, really enjoyed this work of art. Panagiota
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Date: 8/6/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota for your lovely comment :). -ps
Date: 5/7/2019 10:11:00 PM
Not for contest?! Well, I guess you didn't want others to have to compete for second place. This is POTD quality, my friend. Bravo. ~ gw
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Date: 5/7/2019 10:55:00 PM
You are so good for my ego! "not for contest" because of the liberty I took with the form (line 4). I just couldn't fix it AND still like it... ~ps

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